Does this story i wrote make any sense is it good?

okay so i’m just writing stupid stuff for fun and i’m curious if this first chapter or part of the first chapter is okay?
Please be honest.

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I couldn’t hear Jennys Pycho babble , it was quite odd actually usually i’m listening to what she has to say about what’s going on in the world
but i guess not i guess i’ve been quite distracted lately , “Earth to izz?” as i was thinking her words finally broke through my thoughts.
“What’s The matter Izz you’ve been acting like a zonked zombie?” Jenny Said she was uttery right i was acting like a zombie i wasn’t zonked though
the metophors people use these days Gesh as i was contomplating all the things that were running through my head i heard a voice strangely it felt alluring
so it got my attention as the voice spoke i could taste a bitter sweet taste it wasn’t a horrible taste but it was just too sugary , “Elizabeth My child”
when i heard those words break oh so clearly through my thoughts i couldn’t help but scream and when i did all i could see was darkness
it was a gray misty cloud of darkness it was like it was blocking my vison like it blocks the sun , What was happening to me? as i was trying to see
past the misty bitter sweet clouds i was able to hear Jennys voice yelling “Some Help! Izz needs help” after that i could hear running footsteps coming
down the hall i also heard Jenny Sobbing and a teacher which vaguely sounded like Mr.Larson whom i may add was a very handsome as i heard him yell
Call 911 and get the nurse i could only wonder what was happening to me my body felt heavy and limp but my mind was like the wind swaying.
about two mintues later i felt strong hands picking me up and putting me on a hard but very firm what seem to be a stretcher , after that everything
went completly dark.When I woke up i was in a big silver and i was hooked up too what seem to be a millon machines when i struggled to get them off a nurse
ran up to me and told me “Not to take them out” i was astonished how beatiful this woman was she didn’t look like anybody she didn’t even look like a
model she was much more amazing looking than that she was like a godess as i was regathering my thoughts after that she said : “Why thank you i’m glad you
think i look like a godess , i look ordinary around here” when she said that a shock wave of curioustly on how she knew that went through me
had i said that out loud? how could i my mouth was covered had i gone so insane that i was hearing things? then the godess like nurse said
“No Sweety your not insane i can just read your mind i was astonished at what i had just heard” then thinking that i was going to be whitty in my mind
i said “That makes sense” the nurse nodded her head and giggled at me and when she laughed it was like a wave of happiness washed through me.
Then of course i asked the obvious “Were i am?” the nurse then spoke “You are at the world academy hospital” her voice was like a million amazing church
bells ringing it was calming but when i realized what she said i really thought i lost it i thought i was in a dream why because the world Academy
was for the tweenty gaurdians who protect the earth and moon then i screamed in my head “WHAT?!” she flinched as i was yelling at her she spoke again and
said my name is “Arita of Elisone , and you have come here because you hold a gift that no gaurdian or queen of the galaxy has” thinking i really
was going insane i pondered what she said and asked “What is this gift , and why me” then she answered “Elizabeth i can not tell you because i have no idea”
, “Then how” almost shouting in my head as she was gathering herself she said that “only the Galaxys queen really knows for she blocks us from seeing the
others gift or power” i seriously almost had a sezisure hearing that because i mean come on seriously the Queen of the galaxy knows this gift i have?
it’s quite confusing to be honest it was giving me a headache then Arita Of Elisone mentioned that maybe if i wearn’t yelling in my mind i would have
bad migrans , i gave her a instant semi grin then all of a sudden she could help but burst into laughter after she stopped laughing she was walking out
of the silver big room on her way out i heard what seemed like a whisper from her say “Be Prepared to meet the Queen tonight” when she said that my entire
stomach dropped.After she had left the room i had so many questions like what’s going on and how did i end up at the world academy from just fainted and
those voices in my head what were they but most importantly were are my parent’s? of course hours had passed and i laying there thinking that i need
to wake up from the dream that i was having out of nowhere then i heard a mans voice it souned vaguely familar which was odd and yet not suprising
but then i realized who’s voice it was i couldn’t help but gasp it was Mr.Larsons voice except different
I know somethings are mispelled
Yes I KNOW!! i wrote this story in like five mintues so forgive me for not being perfect at spelling i was writing very fast
all i ask if the PLOT IS GOOD! not the spelling or paragraphs